Monday, October 29, 2012

Dangling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeble fingers at work
The ball-point taking its walk,
Strolling through my sheet's streets
And its footprints it leaves in bits.
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Emmanuel Damilola Adeyemo
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Romeo Della Valle 29 October 2012

A reservoir a powerful, meaningful words along with rich imagery! Awesome! Beautifully inked and poignant! Your talent is clearly shown in this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! I hope you have the chance to read my just posted poem about the hurricane Sandy heading this way to New York City! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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