Danger In A National Forest Comments
My two older brothers and their friends
usually didn't want me hanging around.
They talked about girls, and I was only fourteen.
Too young, so I was usually homebound.
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A fascinating story, but the last line confused me. Didn't you mean DONE instead of DUNN?
(Part two) Cougars do indeed attack people sometimes. I read a book recently called THE BEAST IN THE GARDEN, about a cougar that attacked and killed (and partly devoured) a college student in Colorado Springs, Colorado, when he went out jogging in the nearby mountains. Then just last night there was something on TV about a young child that was attacked in California. I think he survived. I didn't see the whole story. Anyway, very good job on this poem!
Thanks, Kim. This is the first time I have seen your comments. I appreciate the support.
My comment is too long.300 character is the maximum. This is part one. An exciting tale, for sure. You did very well in the telling of it. Good rhyming scheme, which I also like to use: abcb.
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7/21/2025 9:31:58 PM # 1.0.0
A great story that kept me in suspense! Very well done. I loved it.
Thanks, Jack. I appreciate readers who like my poems.