Dandy Don Comments

i love this poem and a great title. sounds like a great place to be

Remarkable piece, great flow and the visuals....well as I said..Remarkable! ! ! fantastic poem, really enjoyed your creation all the very best J.L

A very funny verse Richard and you have described each scene perfectly. Excellent work. Andrew

Hello again Richard friend. Wow, a very nice read. You keep writing like this and I will have to come and spend a few days at the lake. Good job! LC

Hilarious Richard, I loved this story. Wonderfully written and a joy to find. Loved the last two lines especially. Great poem. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX