A burst of color,
Vivacious yellow,
An exquisite beauty,
This little fellow.
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i love this one very much. nature is such an intriguing part of life. u captivated it so well.
Aww very good imagery. However i agree with Rachael it seems theres more to the dandelions like they have another meaning then weeds. Good use of words too!
This poem makes me think of other things and not just weeds. Like dandelions are a metaphor for something else. Love your writing.
I say that dandelions are pretty, and should be planted as flowers in flower gardens...
It reminds me of when I used to pick dandelions for my mother and she'd keep them in the house, displaying them like they were really pretty flowers.
This is great, Jim. I think it turned out just the way you intended.
This is great! i really like it! i think my favorite part was the crook part. it's cute.
I loved it! It was silly but it had a message too. Great job.
Amazing poem Jim! I like the part about the little crook inside the flower.
Wow, Jim. VERY beautiful! Dandelions are weeds technically, but I think they are amazing looking flowers :) KUDOS! ! You get +25 rad points :)