Friday, April 17, 2009

Dandelions Comments

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A burst of color,
Vivacious yellow,
An exquisite beauty,
This little fellow.
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Jim Butler
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Melissa Black 06 May 2009

Wow, Jim. VERY beautiful! Dandelions are weeds technically, but I think they are amazing looking flowers :) KUDOS! ! You get +25 rad points :)

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Ashleigh Michaud 06 May 2009

i love this one very much. nature is such an intriguing part of life. u captivated it so well.

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Harley Roth 06 May 2009

Aww very good imagery. However i agree with Rachael it seems theres more to the dandelions like they have another meaning then weeds. Good use of words too!

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Rachael Lee 01 May 2009

This poem makes me think of other things and not just weeds. Like dandelions are a metaphor for something else. Love your writing.

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Melissa Nikolova 01 May 2009

I say that dandelions are pretty, and should be planted as flowers in flower gardens...

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CoreyLeigh Mason 28 April 2009

It reminds me of when I used to pick dandelions for my mother and she'd keep them in the house, displaying them like they were really pretty flowers.

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Danielle Martens 27 April 2009

This is great, Jim. I think it turned out just the way you intended.

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Gloria Noveron 22 April 2009

This is great! i really like it! i think my favorite part was the crook part. it's cute.

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Mckenzie Spaulding 20 April 2009

I loved it! It was silly but it had a message too. Great job.

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Nichole Webb 17 April 2009

Amazing poem Jim! I like the part about the little crook inside the flower.

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