Friday, August 10, 2012

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caught in the fog
that separates the distance between us
drowning under waves
waves that stir up trouble
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Aria Siren
fog
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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

caught in the fog that separates the distance between us drowning under waves waves that stir up trouble slapping a desert with more dust.....beautiful imagery and personification! ...................lovely poem...

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Alla Simone 19 August 2012

Excellent imagery! And the part that aches the most fobids me to press rewind...we will see each other & squim.

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Søren Valentine 10 August 2012

hmm... i like it! :)

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