Friday, March 24, 2006

Dandelion Sky Comments

Rating: 2.9

After the war,
and the forest burned down,
Nothing was left,
save the scorched barren ground.
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Gary Bryson
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Sylvia Spencer 02 April 2006

Gary This poem was a plesure to read and I too loved the last line. Some of your poetry is awsum this is included. cheers Sylvie.

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Patricia Gale 24 March 2006

Wonderful image, I could deplict every word with a picture. I love the title Patricia Gale

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Chuck Audette 24 March 2006

Some great images & decent rhymes. Loved the closing line. -chuck

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