Wind hush is the sky breath
It spreads cotton wings
White and light
And it's you try to fly
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A wonderful poem, Soul. There is something about dandelions. They exist in a crowded communities. Perhaps their closeness is an ideal metaphor for tight friendships. Eventually, circumstances change and one must abandon the security of the collective, and so the seed flies away. Despite now the distance, the friendship remains. Great poem, Soul.
This poem written on Dandelion is beautiful, touching and stunning and has a philosophical ground. Highly imaginative. Let it be quoted.... Perhaps we don't know where but you deserve something Like dancing in the air you will cheer with happiness There's still a long journey Before a seed to find a site A basement to grow Taller and restart great life, Bear everything all bright... Thanks for sharing.
A beautiful write that touches the soul. Always there....straight to my favorites.
Dandelions are taproots. Taproot motto: You can rip us up, but you can't get rid of us. Good work
To drift, as the airborne dandelion, with a certain uncertainty...life goes a fluttering, as we a caught up on a breeze. Love your poem...inspiring...my new friend Soul, continue to share your gifts. And thank you for your comments on my poem For The Love Of Luna...I fall in love with the full moon each time I view it..
i like the poem, i like the notes, and i like that the author is confident/brave? enough to write using english when i bet it is not her/his? first language. i like her/his artwork on the poet's page also. i sent Dandelion to my poemlist. i wish i could send some of the dandelions from our lawn somewhere! i do disagree with the use of BASEMENT. perhaps base or foundation could be used instead of basement? in my lifetime i have thought of a basement as a cellar (a bottom floor to a building, not always present in a building, which may be lived in or used for furnace etc. and/or storage) . i did check for other meanings online and found basement sometimes has meant bathroom (chiefly in New England; that's the far northeastern part of the united states) . nice thoughts from a presumably nice person...the poet. thanks for sharing. bri p.s. and thanks for reading 65th-birthday Gift(s) and wishing me a happy birthday. but i am a male, not a female as you implied by using the pronoun her. it was my birthday, not my wife's! no problem! ha ha
Your own Theme notes are this poem's best review. Dandelions will now always seem enchanted to me. Outstanding work, Soul!
Dreams are to be come true. When you meet your dreams on reality, so you become brave.
Whenever I am down in the dredges and need a kind hand to pull me out of the hold of despair, I turn to one of your magical poems and my spirit soars again. Beautiful write.
There's still a long journey Before a seed to find a site A basement to grow Taller and restart great life, Bear everything all bright How much my soul loves those words! ! I can feel my whole being as such flower, my body to earth tied, my spirit yet to fly like a dandelion clock to spread its love! Inspiring, great write.Thank you!
I love this...so metaphorical, so sweet, so perfectly written..a joy to read some deep and profound thoughts in here...loved it!
I know that you have a huge heart. I suspected it from the very first. This writing shows your heart to the world so perfectly. I'm very happy to know you here, Soul. :)
High strings of imaginations flying around your mind...Brilliant and shocking deductions of humor and tragedy
Thank you Jade Leong for that nice comment, if you see this, i have to say i am sorry i have no FB account: p anyway...now confirmed your guess were wrong joking hahaha, , It's okay to steal it and you always free to stop by anytime :) Cheers Jade! ! _Unwritten Soul
There's still a long journey. With happiness we do this. Life is better perceived due to time's impact. An amazing poem is beautifully penned...10