Monday, September 5, 2011

Dandelion Comments

Rating: 4.3

Wind hush is the sky breath
It spreads cotton wings
White and light
And it's you try to fly
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

There's still a long journey. With happiness we do this. Life is better perceived due to time's impact. An amazing poem is beautifully penned...10

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Swathy 13 July 2018

What a big poem👎🙆🙏😴

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Mj Lemon 22 December 2017

A wonderful poem, Soul. There is something about dandelions. They exist in a crowded communities. Perhaps their closeness is an ideal metaphor for tight friendships. Eventually, circumstances change and one must abandon the security of the collective, and so the seed flies away. Despite now the distance, the friendship remains. Great poem, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

This poem written on Dandelion is beautiful, touching and stunning and has a philosophical ground. Highly imaginative. Let it be quoted.... Perhaps we don't know where but you deserve something Like dancing in the air you will cheer with happiness There's still a long journey Before a seed to find a site A basement to grow Taller and restart great life, Bear everything all bright... Thanks for sharing.

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 July 2017

A beautiful write that touches the soul. Always there....straight to my favorites.

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Richard Jarboe 02 July 2016

Dandelions are taproots. Taproot motto: You can rip us up, but you can't get rid of us. Good work

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2016

Wonderful taproot motto ric! ! Be strong be strong its not wrong :)

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Susan Lacovara 21 September 2013

To drift, as the airborne dandelion, with a certain uncertainty...life goes a fluttering, as we a caught up on a breeze. Love your poem...inspiring...my new friend Soul, continue to share your gifts. And thank you for your comments on my poem For The Love Of Luna...I fall in love with the full moon each time I view it..

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

a good write enjoyed the read

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2013

i like the poem, i like the notes, and i like that the author is confident/brave? enough to write using english when i bet it is not her/his? first language. i like her/his artwork on the poet's page also. i sent Dandelion to my poemlist. i wish i could send some of the dandelions from our lawn somewhere! i do disagree with the use of BASEMENT. perhaps base or foundation could be used instead of basement? in my lifetime i have thought of a basement as a cellar (a bottom floor to a building, not always present in a building, which may be lived in or used for furnace etc. and/or storage) . i did check for other meanings online and found basement sometimes has meant bathroom (chiefly in New England; that's the far northeastern part of the united states) . nice thoughts from a presumably nice person...the poet. thanks for sharing. bri p.s. and thanks for reading 65th-birthday Gift(s) and wishing me a happy birthday. but i am a male, not a female as you implied by using the pronoun her. it was my birthday, not my wife's! no problem! ha ha

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Frank James Davis 15 April 2013

Your own Theme notes are this poem's best review. Dandelions will now always seem enchanted to me. Outstanding work, Soul!

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Poetheart Morgan 14 December 2012

Dreams are to be come true. When you meet your dreams on reality, so you become brave.

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Walterrean Salley 13 August 2012

Very delightful. Gives hope and inspiration to all.

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Captain Cur 24 June 2012

Whenever I am down in the dredges and need a kind hand to pull me out of the hold of despair, I turn to one of your magical poems and my spirit soars again. Beautiful write.

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Elena Sandu 13 May 2012

There's still a long journey Before a seed to find a site A basement to grow Taller and restart great life, Bear everything all bright How much my soul loves those words! ! I can feel my whole being as such flower, my body to earth tied, my spirit yet to fly like a dandelion clock to spread its love! Inspiring, great write.Thank you!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 April 2012

A great tribute to your friend.

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Shadow Girl 21 October 2011

I love this...so metaphorical, so sweet, so perfectly written..a joy to read some deep and profound thoughts in here...loved it!

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Patti Masterman 10 October 2011

I know that you have a huge heart. I suspected it from the very first. This writing shows your heart to the world so perfectly. I'm very happy to know you here, Soul. :)

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Amir Forougi 02 October 2011

High strings of imaginations flying around your mind...Brilliant and shocking deductions of humor and tragedy

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Unwritten Soul 26 September 2011

Thank you Jade Leong for that nice comment, if you see this, i have to say i am sorry i have no FB account: p anyway...now confirmed your guess were wrong joking hahaha, , It's okay to steal it and you always free to stop by anytime :) Cheers Jade! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Ebi Robert 24 September 2011

the first stanzas alone has thought me how to flow.........

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