Dandelion Comments

u make it sound so soothing and soft..amazing write.bravo!

britt, if i aint soundin starkerish, u r beautiful at heart, having never met u, u takeaway my air and astound me everytime we message, u r a great poet, and r beautiful at heart, and dontneed to change for any1 but urself, i have givin this advice to many

wow.......this one is too good........10!

I have always liked dandelions- I think they're more beautiful than a daisy, or a daffodil- and I love this poem. Thanks Athena :)

I like it very much. It really portrays the feelings of a dandelion I think it symbolizes that anything can be beautiful.

i really like this poem. it explains that in life, you're looking for something. though unsure of what it is, you know how you want to be in the end. it's desperate for attention and i think fitting in. perhaps one day, you will blossom into the beautiful flower inside you. Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth

a very nice write...great poem..and nicely expressed...well done for a good start Ency Bearis

Time to blossom into your true beautful self, A rose may rise up through the confusion of life

Very beautiful poem your are an extremely talented writer. I can't wait to read more of your work...

Yoonoos is my good friend and I like the points he made about your technical merits here. This is a fine poem. For me, The fact that you had a specific purpose was important. The specific meaning is always much harder to do and I confess that I prefer crystal clarity, whereas others may not. I gave it an 8 and a recommendation to other readers to read it. All in all, it is a keeper as they say.

Everything in nature has true value.What is one persons weed is another person's flower. Try to watch your I's ok use the capital form of the letter I not i except in a word.