Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Dancing With You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight as you kiss up and down my body,
I am screaming out in exstacy, loudly.
I can see the stars in my eyes; you hold me so tightly.
I am weak in your arms strongly yet gently you protect me.
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Jeri Martindale
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Rebecca Navarre 23 November 2016

Wow! ! ! Very Powerful! ! ! Deep Sensational Write! ! ! You Have A Amazing Way Of Being Descriptive! ! ! The Heart Behind The Pen Is Very Magical! ! ! You Are A Very Special! ! ! Very Talented Poet! ! ! 10S! ! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2015

Your arms around me, my head upon your chest. You are so AMAZING! You are my thoughts as I begin dreaming. So rewarding to awake with you beside me; smiling as I gaze at your face. I kiss you and 'Dance' with you day by day, happy with you forever I remain full of ecstatic joy. intense passion, love, physical experience, full of poetic dance.. thank you very much

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Akhtar Jawad 17 March 2015

An unique and stylish description of a woman's passion in love...................

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Bernard Snyder 19 July 2014

Sensational! ! I too was 'dancing as I read this! Lol

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Pranab K Chakraborty 25 March 2014

Intense with passion. Dance and love as long as possible.

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Jeri Martindale

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