Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Dancing With The Daffodils Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m dancing with the Daffodils
In Spring-time’s warm embrace -
With golden hearts and coronets
They’re swaying with such grace
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Valerie Dohren
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Bishakha alam 08 July 2018

Love it

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Ken E Hall 18 March 2014

What a way to travel dancing with daffodils nice to know you are a singer too...thats what I call living, you present happiness so well...luvli...regards

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Amitava Sur 12 March 2014

A lovely poem Valerie ''' it pulled me way back to my childhood, running abundantly in the meadows and playing with the butterflies. I’m dancing with the Daffodils And singing all day long ..... very nice feeling.

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John Brown 04 March 2014

Lovely poem Val. We have some tete a tete daffs in our garden, and they are beautiful, I think I'll go dance with them now.

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Valsa George 27 February 2014

This lovely poem reminds me of Wordsworth's golden Daffodiles swaying in the breeze! 'Waltzing in the sun/ Upon a ball room trimmed with green....'. Beatuiful lines!

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Meena Mustafa 26 February 2014

Just lovely! the rhyming is just perfect and so is the poem :) thanks for sharing.

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Excellently expressed.I have added this to my poem list.

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Juan Olivarez 25 February 2014

You never missed a step Val. As far as I am concerned you will always be the cream of the crop. Keep those lovelies coming.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 24 February 2014

it's a beautiful poem...Lovely treat to a soul caught in routine, humdrum life...

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Jennifer Heaven 24 February 2014

Spring has sprung - and now my heart with pleasure fills and dances with the daffodils

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 24 February 2014

Dance away Val. Or should that be Mrs Wordsworth? This has a lovely lilt of optimism. Spring must be just around the corner. Hugznstuff

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Hans Vr 22 February 2014

I agree so much with Joseph. Very nice and uplifting poem.

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Joseph Anderson 21 February 2014

Val- this is a very uplifting, inspiring and high spirited poem and you wrote it before you had to much to drink. i hope you can smell the roses again. Go easy on mixing drinks

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 February 2014

Beautiful poem. These daffodils compete with those of Wordsworth.

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Dave Walker 20 February 2014

A beautiful poem that sounds like a beautiful place to be.

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