Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Dancing With Tears In My Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.3

The truth hurt, nothing to atone
There were no lies
Moving alone
Dancing with tears in my eyes
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Robert Green
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Ramesh Rai 24 September 2013

The highest peak of sadness is well celebrated through your write.

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Shahzia Batool 30 March 2012

This is exactly what is happening here...n you are one of the crowd of people celebrating the sorrows...a peculiar trait of the melancholy-seekers...the age-old theme of the blend of pain n pleasure is intensified by dancing with tears in eyes...

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Ency Bearis 28 March 2012

A poignant poem, words can be felt deep from emotion with such pain. Great write. See my new poem - 10000 Questions.

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Valerie Dohren 21 March 2012

How very sad Robert, conjures up such a sad picture of loneliness.

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