You're reaching for a ghost from the past,
Who is gone
Dancing with shadows,
While you're all alone.
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A poem from a broken heart wishing to made whole again? ........well penned PP
Superb! ! ! What great lines with meaningful message.....well crafted! ! ! 10
Thank you, Aqua! Good to see you! This one sounds like the type of poem that you would enjoy!
he's dancing with shadows but yet to see the beauty that lies within thee
An amazing piece of poetry! Liked the second stanza most..10
Thank you so much, Doctor Swain! It is indeed an honour to hear from you! :)
Very beautiful poem dear poetess.... Step out into the light, and open Lovelorn eyes, to see All the gals who'd love to love you, ...And one of them is me.... thanks
Thank you, Prabir, for your fine comment! : -)