Thursday, July 2, 2009

Dancing With Destiny Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am getting tired
of starting afresh
each time
somewhere new;
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Vanessa Hernandez
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 July 2009

wow, very well written, strong and too deep, I LOVE your tone and your words are well chosen, you did leave with something to think of 'loving you was a mistake' amazing line, flows smoothly. you managed to capture my attention, I really love it, keep it up :)

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