Thursday, March 29, 2007

Dancing Warrior Comments

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if you can simply dance
elegantly with a wave of a fan
you can simply wield a sword of
a samuari and fight with stance...
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jennifer her
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Someone Else 30 March 2007

Excellently created content, But, again, proof it to fix the errors (spelling) . The combination of dance images with the rhythm and elements of nature add to the quality and show a talent beyond your age. Fix the eratta and you will have a superior quality poem.

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