Friday, May 2, 2008

Dancing To The Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

Melodies of romance harmonize
with aquamarine ocean
Constant waves gently touch
golden sandy beaches
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Indira Renganathan 17 September 2009

'Melodies of romance harmonize...' a good start hinting the theme of the sun-set and beach-side...well done

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

hmmm... hula dancers at waikiki beach. lovely thank you.md

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Viola Grey 10 August 2008

this is beautiful...I am always happy that I live by the sea...you create images so clearly you can almost touch them....great work.

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Justin Henry 09 August 2008

wow..very detailed I almost feel like I'm actually at the beach

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Mamta Agarwal 05 August 2008

as Howard says, you have painted a beautful picture with your words. indeed lovely. thanks for sharing. Mamta

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Robert Howard 25 May 2008

Not even Renoir could have painted this scene with more grace and beauty.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 24 May 2008

The scenic panoply is palpably real with visions of those images etched on the mind's horison throughout. Rgds, Ivan

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 May 2008

Absolutely beautiful...I was right there on that sandy beach...Thank you Hemakumar.

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Andrew Blakemore 11 May 2008

This is a marvellous piece of work. Wonderful imagery and your words paint a beautiful picture. Andrew

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Philip Housiaux 10 May 2008

What a lot of lovely epithets for your island - I understand it is truly a tropical paradise.

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Bonnie Collins 06 May 2008

Oh how beautiullly penned with so much imagery you can actually visualize the sunsetting upon the pearly sands, and smell the ocean's breeze.... Very nice Bonnie

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Julie Dant 05 May 2008

Hemakumar, what a romantic and beautiful write this is. Your descriptiveness is superb. Your poems are jewels to unearth line by line. Julie

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Rani Turton 05 May 2008

Very unusual theme and beautifully expressed. The sunset, the ocean, the lady dancing, all evoked so prettily. Thanks for it.

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Sandra Fowler 05 May 2008

An extraordinary word painting. Who would not wish to dance to the music of such a beautiful sunset? Warmest regards, Sandra

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 May 2008

fantastic poem as when lyrical love when rythmic by the scarlet green when jingles by the green..............a poem of love by the imagery, heart when splashes by the blue is of unique genre,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2008

beautiful imagery here...i behold your maiden evening briskly leaving... leaving her shadow long in my mind... good write. congrats.

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Alison Cassidy 03 May 2008

Such a lyrical poem, extravagantly painted in lush oils. Your poem shows a sunset that is unique to your glorious country, I'm sure. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ernestine Northover 03 May 2008

What a beautifully expressed poem Hemakumar, the imagery is wonderful and the weave impressive. Lovely, lovely read and such a pleasure to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Abha Sharma 03 May 2008

a lovely heart soothing sunset, with stunning nature around, sensuously beautiful... As the time goes by evening sun slowly dips down Sparkling glow timely fades on the distant horizon ......................great imagery,

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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