Dancing The Divide Comments

I really like your poems Iris. I am constantly amazed by the structure and correct spelling of your poetry. Reminds me of.....me. Albeit less anger. Haha!

.... 'he finds the freedom between the divide'. Some serious internal rhymes and echoes there, and rhythm to boot..... 'Through fine lines and fissures strained waters swell.. ' and so it goes, wending in surges and calms, from its spring of conception to its sea (or is it island..) of resolution... Loads of clever wordplay, stand-out images and thrusts of energetic progress - action sequences broken by judiciously placed stills..... unusually creative conjuring Justine.. xx PS - more please!