Friday, May 2, 2008

Dancing Tears Comments

Rating: 4.8

They appeared at the rim,
but refused to come over it.
I don't know why--
they seemed frightened a bit.
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maria rahman
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 December 2009

This is a beautifully sad poem written in deep feelings of sorrow, very well described. Keep it up Maria. The title is very catchy...10 Best Wishes Naseer

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 September 2008

A beautiful poem and my 10 with it. Dancing tears, a nice image. Wonderful title.

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Why so sad? After sorrow comes joy...life is very dificult in your country and I pray that someday it will be better.There is always hope and faith to help dry away the tears.Very poignant poem.I wish you the best life can offer.A ten from me.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2008

Lovely expression indeed. i am giving 10 for this. The title ammmmmmazing! !

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