They appeared at the rim,
but refused to come over it.
I don't know why--
they seemed frightened a bit.
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A beautiful poem and my 10 with it. Dancing tears, a nice image. Wonderful title.
Why so sad? After sorrow comes joy...life is very dificult in your country and I pray that someday it will be better.There is always hope and faith to help dry away the tears.Very poignant poem.I wish you the best life can offer.A ten from me.
Lovely expression indeed. i am giving 10 for this. The title ammmmmmazing! !
This is a beautifully sad poem written in deep feelings of sorrow, very well described. Keep it up Maria. The title is very catchy...10 Best Wishes Naseer