Dancing Shadows Comments

An effervescent display of imagescaping, Ace...I like the employment of the variable or spot rhyming...You know, Just an IMO, if you don't mind...After reading this gem twice, I think the piece might present even better if it were restructured by implementing stanzaec structure, such as perhaps 5 cinquain stanzas...25 lines in total...No need to change any text...IT is fine as is...Consider having the final lines of each stanza rhyme....And again, that's just this amateurs IMO...Either way...I like what you did here... ~FjR~