Sunday, September 24, 2006

Dancing On Thin Ice Comments

Rating: 5.0

We met by the pond,
frozen which was nice.
The full moon light,
the surface of the ice.
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David Darbyshire
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Ernestine Northover 25 September 2006

Nice! Nice! Nice! Ice-see a very nice poem here. I enjoyed reading it very much. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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***** ********* 25 September 2006

I spend my life dancing on thin Ice Dave, the adrenaline buzz is amazing! and I still haven't learned to swim! lol Smiling at you, Tai

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 25 September 2006

You're right Dave... I really lioked this one... Best CJ

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Francesca Johnson 24 September 2006

Dave, this poem shows that you are able to write deep and meaningful stuff. I like this new style. As for the poem, sometimes we have to take risks to get what we want, even if it means walking on thin ice. I just hope it doesn't crack, that's all..... Love, Fran the Fan xx

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