Thursday, May 1, 2008

Dancing On Insanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

A shove so great to break you -
Falling, flailing into nonbeing;
No longer knowing your greatness.
A gentle man beaten by insanity,
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COMMENTS
Ershad Mazumder 15 August 2008

Thanks dear kim.This is the right poem I am looking for long time.Great piece for me. I am a devil poet. Insanity is my dress.Immorality is my religion.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2008

You really have great poems too.This is a very nice piece; infact, you've taken some levels too.Thanks E.K.L.

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Ashley Fortin 15 August 2008

Your poem has really good insight to what it might feel like, it's really descrpitive in a mental point of veiw & less of the phyisical charactaristic of it. Over all I loved it!

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Bob Gibson 04 May 2008

A wonderful poem, we can't turn back the clock pet!

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Kim Schilling

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