Dancing On Clouds Comments

Love is her retreat it swims like a fun loving dolphin, Just like candy so sweet kisses and hugs.... Her music is booming out loud, Now she is dancing on clouds.... beautifulllllll sad, but sometimes it is the reality of life.... thank you daer poetess. dev

WE are all born to fall down yet the strength of this woman is so much more. She can see above the scars that have bullied her. She knows there is so much more to life. Thanks Hazel

Sweet and sensitive.

Wow Beautiful poem....Loved reading it..Thanks for sharing with us... Thanks you Hazel for the beautiful comment for my 100th poem..Thanks a lot.

Clever poem moving thru with a perfect ending being a dancer know the hissing sounds...funny some women have only to be beautiful to recieve the brunt of the snakes wrath...regards

i appreciate this! ! ! so good! !

I know all about this and feel the sadness with her sometimes the only way to cope is to retreat into the musiac of life. A very good write thanks for sharing. BB: O{

It's victory over malice and manipulation. You' ve used contrasting images like snake, sour lemon vs dolphin and sweet candy to describe your theme. A good write

Many ways to kill the grief in fact why there is a grief, in brief we must turn to see the nature the earth and its habitat, never hesitate each breathe will give you a new life, just try.....after all you have done it nicely

There are bullies all around. But they can never be silenced. Finding ways to overcome the pain caused by such bullies is the only way out as the young woman has done, seeking delight in music and love. A great write! !