Friday, May 30, 2008

Dancing On Butterfly Wings Comments

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Dancing dancing,
swaying my hips.
You wish you could see
the butterfly tattoo
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Ashley burnam
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Bonnie Collins 04 June 2008

This is very good Asley, it is filled with so much imagery that flows so tenderly and leaves the reader with such a warm feeling.... Very good. Bonnie

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Tyrone Wingfield 30 May 2008

this poem is AMAZING I love the rythm its has, you could probly make it into a song if you tried

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