Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Dancing On Air Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m dancing on air
whenever you are near me.
I’m dancing on air
whenever you call my name.
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David Harris
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You are as light as a feather in this poem David and I see clouds are very much part of this poem which evoke beautiful imagery. The poem sings to me too with its flowing meter and style. 10 love Karin

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Carol Gall 27 October 2009

daning on air in love great poem 10

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Patti Masterman 27 October 2009

Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers told me in private that you wrote this one just for them! Wonderful imagery in this. Love the meter too; just right.

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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