it was a beautiful starlit night
as the moon danced across the water.
like a ballerina upon a stage.
dazzling, hypnotizing, mesmerizing.
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I, personally, quite enjoy this. I've never really enjoyed 'typical' poems. I've never been big on rhyming, but I like the way you've put it in.
I've seen the word fireflies written a couple of times the last few weeks. it seems that word always brings back beautiful memories. Great idea of putting it in with loking at the moon. Seems like it's the only time you can see them both shine is when their together. Great work