Friday, June 4, 2010

Dancing Matachin Comments

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Your love is a balm for my sorrow and pain,
And the moon is hiding it like a cocoon.
These feelings touch the blue of our deep, cold rain
As close as the sea feels the white of the moon.
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Marieta Maglas
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Christina Simmons 23 December 2016

Such a wonderful inspirational piece of poetry. I found it very optimistic an up lifting. Thank you for your calming and influencing words.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 05 June 2010

We are rhetorical lovers crowned with unacceptability Living for that moment indecipherable unto its sense Impassibly even when relativity force loses its intensity Trying to revival our bleeding love, its spiritual incense Along with unconventional 'dust of kisses', 'nervous rain' above lines are also makes reader spell-bound. 'crowned with unacceptability', 'moment indecipherable'............ You can keep the quoted lines into a frame and hang it in the sky to Zoom it as wide as the firmament. Well done by words. Salute you poet once again. LIVE AND WRITE LONG....... Regards, pranab

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Marieta Maglas

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