Knock, knock
On the window.
Two fat raindrops
Calling me out.
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A freedom of dance and nature touched by the spirit of Isadora Duncan...loved it 10
What a beautiful and spontaneous poem Sallie. I really enjoyed it and read it to my family sitting by fireplace in my living room while it was about to rain outside.
forget the Dark... the Lightninig is there to spot light you and to gift you more applause.... good write, sallie
Sallie, this is fantastic poem and I really do not use 'fantastic' very often. Love.........................Risha
...dancing in the rain, with my pants off I'm dancing in the rain. D-lightful!
Nice one, Sallie. Very sensuous. And sensual. Don't want a night in the cells nor to have MY ardour cooled..... Love, Fran xxx
Sallie I can get like that after a few brown ales. A night in the cells usually cools my ardour.Nice write though and entertaining too.Thanks for that! ! Sid John x
.....And that is exactly how it comes across. You made me feel it. A great write. Ez
I Love Your Poem and Your Poetry as a whole. You have talent, a singular and unique voice, and a heart that seeks for adventure and truth and sometimes suffers for it! 10