Thursday, May 10, 2007

Dancing In The Rain. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Knock, knock
On the window.
Two fat raindrops
Calling me out.
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Sallie Howson
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Susan Williams 13 September 2020

I Love Your Poem and Your Poetry as a whole. You have talent, a singular and unique voice, and a heart that seeks for adventure and truth and sometimes suffers for it! 10

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Siddharth Singh 05 August 2009

well and truly exquisite. I give you a10.

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Laurie Hill 28 June 2009

A freedom of dance and nature touched by the spirit of Isadora Duncan...loved it 10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 09 April 2009

very well worded and a celebration of life indeed

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 December 2008

What a beautiful and spontaneous poem Sallie. I really enjoyed it and read it to my family sitting by fireplace in my living room while it was about to rain outside.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 April 2008

forget the Dark... the Lightninig is there to spot light you and to gift you more applause.... good write, sallie

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Risha : Ahmed 25 June 2007

Sallie, this is fantastic poem and I really do not use 'fantastic' very often. Love.........................Risha

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Jerry Hughes 23 June 2007

...dancing in the rain, with my pants off I'm dancing in the rain. D-lightful!

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Ivor Hogg 12 May 2007

What else can yoiu in the rain but dance naked Bravo

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Francesca Johnson 11 May 2007

Nice one, Sallie. Very sensuous. And sensual. Don't want a night in the cells nor to have MY ardour cooled..... Love, Fran xxx

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Sid John Gardner. 11 May 2007

Sallie I can get like that after a few brown ales. A night in the cells usually cools my ardour.Nice write though and entertaining too.Thanks for that! ! Sid John x

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.....And that is exactly how it comes across. You made me feel it. A great write. Ez

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