Dancing In The Rain Comments

Falling raindrops weave pearls in her hair And shimmer on black charcoal path.- - - - - - - - - - -brought me outside in the rain with those lines- - 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ poem

When night descends She closes her eyes to step lightly In the archaic city of youth, To sing and dance on an empty street.- - - - - -In my dreams I am always young and running and jumping and riding- -tus a lovely gift God has given us this thing called dreams! Falling raindrops weave pearls in her hair And shimmer on black charcoal path.

A wonderful poem on the begone days of childhood. The lost days are remembered with passion. " A shy girl dances to the beats of drain drops" " But the song bird has flown away" are superb lines" . Thanks for sharing

A beautiful poem that touches the hearts like rains touching the heart and soul.

Incredibly beautiful, the scene almost comes to mind- of a girl dancing in rain.

MA'AM YOU MAY NOT DANCE READING ME ANYMORE BUT READ MY EYES POEM FOR SURE THE WORLD WILL READ IT AND DANCE WITH YOU MUCH MORE 4 SURE

Fantastic write, like a motion picture rolling through the years, cherished memories both warm and chill.10+

Dear Savita, the imagery in your poem is supreme. We can ask no more of this beautiful poem.