Tuesday, April 3, 2007

Dancing In The Pyre Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sun scorches everything
It breathes on, it breathes in,
Lingering ashes wafting in the air,
Yet I cannot find my sun-seared heart,
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Evon Christian
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 July 2008

Well, this writing is a revelation. When you start to read something, you never know where it is going to end. That is because most writer write in a straight line. When you encounter one that writes in a circle; it is a surprise, and a special one. I thoroughly enjoyed this and I know everyone will. What a joy! GW62

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