Friday, December 13, 2013

Dancing In The Circus Comments

Rating: 4.5

You always pull off the act
But I see right through you.

You believe no one sees through your mask
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Manzanilla Mija
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Khairul Ahsan 14 December 2013

This is a nice poem, with an eye catching title. I give it 9/10. The last stanza is sweet and warm.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 December 2013

very good write, thanks, I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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