Dancing In The Air Comments

nice double simile: ''dancing in the air Like a joyful breeze Falling into waves As deeply as caves'' wonderful poem................10

hmmmm... beautiful rhyme ceta. a picture perfect description. i could imagine. maraming salamat po. sige magsulat ka ng magsulat.

...a fine composition indeed......10

Beautiful poem, lots of lovely crispy visuals in this fine write, Full of colour and smooth texture. Great work! ! best wishes Jon.