You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,
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Wow! This was the best imagery. I felt just like a love fairy as I read it. I wish I could slide down a love rainbow! The imagery at the end got a bit more complex, which kept the poem interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks!
You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair I'm stepping on clouds floating on air, Swinging on stars dreaming on cue Sliding down rainbows nearer to you, such a lovely poem with lots and lots of images. your imagination is amazing. i loved reading it. thank you very much
An amazing poem, Ken. Brings a smile to my heart and eases my mind of worldly cares.
This poem is biut'ful and I love the flow, like a song. God bless you
A lovely verse, thank you for the smile! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
How could I miss this gem? Inloved with your poem! Yes, the dance of beauty could make us walk on clouds. Hiding between daisies with buttercup class a wonderful choice of words, splendid imaagery, who would not love such richness! Thank you for sharing!
Wow fantastic! I read more of yor poems today but this one was of the masterpieces! So imaginative and creative and makes readers soar with yor words and fly like fairies. Kudos! Great to read u again.
Such a beautiful, charming poem with inspired lines that give a touch of magic to this truly delightful poem!
Hello poet Ken. This was an absolutely charming poem, well done. Loyd Taylor
A lovely poem! Beautiful imagery that allows the reader to see the love in the air. Loved it! Thanks
Wow! I applaud this sire, I so much love to be loved and this piece is just so wonderful, keep writing sire.
love this one. it make think about everything happened to me
Such a sweet and romantic poem... with great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Lovely!
Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great.
Sweet and enjoyable.