Wednesday, June 1, 2011

*** Dancing In Flowers *** Comments

Rating: 2.7

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,
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Ken e Hall
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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 May 2018

Sweet and enjoyable.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 September 2017

Lovely light piece of work shared. Enjoyed.

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Pamela Sinicrope 23 November 2015

Wow! This was the best imagery. I felt just like a love fairy as I read it. I wish I could slide down a love rainbow! The imagery at the end got a bit more complex, which kept the poem interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks!

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 October 2015

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair I'm stepping on clouds floating on air, Swinging on stars dreaming on cue Sliding down rainbows nearer to you, such a lovely poem with lots and lots of images. your imagination is amazing. i loved reading it. thank you very much

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 September 2015

Verily, a lovely rhyming verse

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Akhtar Jawad 25 July 2015

The poem is beautiful painting, simply amazing and wonderful.

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Ayman Parray 06 June 2015

An amazing poem, Ken. Brings a smile to my heart and eases my mind of worldly cares.

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Allotey Abossey 06 June 2015

This poem is biut'ful and I love the flow, like a song. God bless you

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 06 May 2015

A lovely verse, thank you for the smile! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Elena Sandu 02 May 2015

How could I miss this gem? Inloved with your poem! Yes, the dance of beauty could make us walk on clouds. Hiding between daisies with buttercup class a wonderful choice of words, splendid imaagery, who would not love such richness! Thank you for sharing!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 April 2015

Wow fantastic! I read more of yor poems today but this one was of the masterpieces! So imaginative and creative and makes readers soar with yor words and fly like fairies. Kudos! Great to read u again.

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Hazel Durham 25 February 2015

Such a beautiful, charming poem with inspired lines that give a touch of magic to this truly delightful poem!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 08 February 2015

Hello poet Ken. This was an absolutely charming poem, well done. Loyd Taylor

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Elisha Wall 21 January 2015

A lovely poem! Beautiful imagery that allows the reader to see the love in the air. Loved it! Thanks

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John Ugolo Umah 11 January 2015

Wow! I applaud this sire, I so much love to be loved and this piece is just so wonderful, keep writing sire.

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Jeri Martindale 27 December 2014

I knew she was a fairy! !

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Amanda Grube 25 November 2014

love this one. it make think about everything happened to me

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Shania K. Younce 18 October 2014

This is truly a beautiful poem. Bien!

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 September 2014

Such a sweet and romantic poem... with great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Lovely!

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Chris Zachariou 12 July 2014

Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great.

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