Dancing Demon (Limerick) For Wes Vogler And Kelly Kurt Comments

Wes and Kelly: Two of my favorite poets. Saw this title and could not pass it up. Wes is the one who told me I should write more limericks, and I have written many since then.

A nice limerick, Souren. Very interesting notes. Thank you.

You're telling me God wanted man So He sprung a fresh load in his hand? In the other He spit then He rubbed them a bit... And voila! That's how this all began?

Like Abhilasha told, I too do not have knowledge on poetic forms and mainly express through free verse.But, you are a quick learner as is evident from the comments of many senior Members who have authority over English language. What I find is that your writings are very powerful in expression.

Poetry have many forms but in all forms what needed is emotions and observations.....nice sharing....I don't have any knowledge regarding to any form of poetry....mujhe to yahi aakr pata chala haiku limerick prose hain poetry k different forms.....thank you for this nice sharing :)

Enjoyed your limerick...... Perhaps the credit can be shared by all three of you! Souren, you can confidently try your hand on any form.......! !

Syllable counting is highly over rated Kelly try singing it Thank you Souren

Wes is indeed a master. With practice and a good sense of humor, this form can delight both the author and reader. It is good to branch out a bit sometimes beyond your comfort zone, if for nothing else, just to hone writing skills I think the last line was one syllable short