Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Dancing Daffodils Comments

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I saw a crowd of daffodils standing by the trees;
I stood and watched them dancing in the gentle breeze.
Many of them were golden; a few of them were light:
Standing there together, they looked a pretty sight.
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Angela Wybrow
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David Wood 17 April 2013

A lively piem that rhymes well. Daffs are my favorite flower. I also wrote a poem called Daffodil. A good write.

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Valerie Dohren 16 April 2013

Really lovely poem Angela, reminiscent of Wordsworth. Daffodils, aren't they just gorgeous, especially as yellow is my favourite colour. You have captured the scene beautifully.

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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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