Sun drenched skies of yellow and blue
And my heart with pleasure fills
As I dance with the daffodils
In the meadows and woodlands I knew well
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Your word choice is perfection. I love how much landscape plays into your poems. Heart shaped leaves from every tree Touched by a gentle breeze As the suns diamond glow graces the woodland floor below Gorgeously done!
I too like this poem. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline
The imagery is amazing. Very nostalgic and picturesque!
Takes me back to my own strolling through the woods as a boy. Most of them now housing estates now. Nice poem Mary.
You paint a beautiful scene, and the idea of dancing with the daffodils is quite lovely.
I love it! I would leave out the word well, end it with knew because it rhymes with blue