Monday, August 19, 2013

Danced With Daffodils Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sun drenched skies of yellow and blue
And my heart with pleasure fills
As I dance with the daffodils
In the meadows and woodlands I knew well
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Mary Forrester
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Lorib 16 February 2018

I love it! I would leave out the word well, end it with knew because it rhymes with blue

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Leah Ayliffe 10 June 2014

Your word choice is perfection. I love how much landscape plays into your poems. Heart shaped leaves from every tree Touched by a gentle breeze As the suns diamond glow graces the woodland floor below Gorgeously done!

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Adeline Foster 25 May 2014

I too like this poem. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline

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Lenny Camacho 24 May 2014

I like daffodils and I like this poem

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Fiona Schwartzinoff 01 February 2014

The imagery is amazing. Very nostalgic and picturesque!

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John Brown 14 November 2013

Takes me back to my own strolling through the woods as a boy. Most of them now housing estates now. Nice poem Mary.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 September 2013

Nice imagery, well portrayed.

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Valerie Dohren 23 August 2013

You paint a beautiful scene, and the idea of dancing with the daffodils is quite lovely.

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