Sunday, January 29, 2006

Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm thinking hard,
But my mind should be empty.
I practice the movements,
But they come out all wrong.
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Mia Ocean
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Evie Bryce 05 February 2006

from a fellow dancer, great job

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***** ********* 01 February 2006

Dancing is one of my favourite pastimes Mia. You describe letting go to the rhythem beautifully. Keep on doing it. 10 from dancing the nights away! Tai

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Peter Lebuhn 30 January 2006

Dance is about feeling it is great to be accomplished But sometimes let the music move you Dance, Dance, Dance Peter

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Elya Thorn 29 January 2006

Very emotional, describing only one thing, but a glorious one! I love dancing too (use to be a ballerina) and I completly understand this poem and the feelings from it! Elya Thorn

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