Dance With My Blade Comments

You are so brave to have written this. Your will is strong, be careful how you use it. Your great will can be used to preserve, over come, conquer. So many are weak willed, and live by the sword that eventually destroys them. Your dance is the dance of your unharnessed power, your blood is spilling out your great will that is being subdued by pain. Your pain is great, your will is greater. There is greatness in you that is unseen, untapped. The greatness is in your soul to be a over comer, a conquer. You have a real talent. Thank you so dearly for sharing.

That was beautifully written I could feel the emotion in the poem while I read it.

I undesatnd how you feel...I am the same way but ive learend where t ocut so id ont take my life before i want to but still this poem ws breath taking great job

I can relate to this poem. Nice write!

haunting, amazing. Truly stunning. You paint a dark picture. I love it!

A reservoir of truly amazing words attached to great emotions and clearly presented to all of us to read and fully enjoy! 10+++ Your great poetic talent my dear friend is vividly shown in every piece you honestly share with us (The World) . Keep it up! Thank you for all your great comments to my poems! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

Really nice write...love the emotion! ! !

dangerous dance, but the poem is well written

Life and death are opposite sides of the same coin, without death life would be meaningless... We all dance with death on a daily basis, however some of feel the need to taunt him... I love your poem...

i wonder what your soul carry when making this. But i must confess, this is beautiful.

'music fades as the dance slows but the blood dost continue to flow' Truly immaculate lines, we all often dance with the blade, and death hand in hand, but we can't let such things consume us. Beautiful poem.