Saturday, October 15, 2011

Dance With Me Tonight Comments

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I want to dance with you for a life time
Hold you close to my heart,
Stop the hands of time
Make the world give us a little more time
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kaitreena stwert
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Vipins Puthooran 08 December 2011

Oh! 'tis such a wonderful love poem.. Dance with me as the leaves do In an Eden where I met you Hold my breath now on your bosom For shall our love blossom

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Harindhar Reddy 26 October 2011

I this sweet romantic poem on love. Further more, my thrill doubled when read these lines....... 'We'll dance forever; never let go Hearts in tune hand to hand, Building love between us That we barely can stand' Yes, don't your love to escape for your heart of his heart, grasp it tight. Good well flowed thought interwovened and connected well line by line, word by word. I wholeheartedly congratulate the poet for wring such poem like this. Best of luck and carry on with good work.....

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