Friday, September 19, 2014

Dance With Me Comments

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I should be leaving tonight,
but I am still sitting here feeling uptight.
That is when I hear your music play,
your hands, they stroke the keys just right.
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Alesia Leach
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2016

That is when I hear your music play, your hands, they stroke the keys just right. Then, I get that feeling inside and long to feel your body with mine. come dance with me. simply be mine....... i love you..... come let us dance all along the night.... i want to be lost in your dance...... very nice and fine love poem. you have a lot of imagination and a great way of expressing your feelings and emotions. tony

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Jessica Nichols 03 October 2014

Wow nice poem and nice write, but a little sad, it doesn't sound like she wants to be there.

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Trinity Baldwin 29 September 2014

A magnificent love poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2014

Come dance with me my body it longs to be free. What a beautiful poem. Very nice moving together in every way.

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