Dance With Me Comments

There comes the moment to let go and have fun. You captured this so subtly in your well-worded piece. Kudos!

Persuade you to follow me out into the universe. We could make it our ballroom. We could do the tango, en elegant waltz. We could secretly slide over from star to star. let the universe our dancing hall. everlasting ballet, eternal night. wonderful romantic poem full of love and emotion. thank you very much

COME AND DANCE WITH ME is a delightful invitation to share joy with another. But your poem immediately opens up to the cosmic dance floor and the dancers are taken far away from their ordinary lives to a place where night and perfect accord and tireless dance prevails. I was there with them for every measure, taken out of myself into this perfect world you created.

wishing and hoping for eternal life, good one..