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Come, take my hand
as we dance within walls
pitch black with lonliness,
to a deafening tune
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where into my mouth your name then dies upon clenched teeth. I love those lines. very good job. Becca
This poem is amazing. There are so many parts I like You have amazing talent
This has all the primitive essence of ice-cold fire Viola - such economy of words too, where needed. So well done. a big 10 + + + from Fay.
life dancing to the truth music...words expressive sad...bitter but coated with poetic sugar...well written piece, Viola 10
A work of art encompassing all that lies within a love-trialed relationship of two unsuited for each other yet neither wants to live without the other...10
wow. i loved the choice of words i felt them course through me. i loved it alot. i'll be reading some of your others
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7/21/2025 7:00:54 AM # 1.0.0
wow the dance of the gods of silent cymbals crashing in truth wonderful imagery -10 anjali