Thursday, April 20, 2023

Dance Till Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pretty fairy dance till dawn,
In your purple dress so worn,
A garland of flowers in your hair,
With rosy cheeks,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Louise Davies 22 April 2023

I really appreciate all your lovely comments x Thank you all!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 April 2023

A very cute poem dear poetess....loved reading it. Top score!

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Richard Wlodarski 21 April 2023

Sounds like a beautiful lullaby. A really nice rhythmic flow to your poem. Great job, Jayne!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 April 2023

I enjoyed this one very much Bravo! ! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 20 April 2023

What a charmingly, musical poem. A true joy, indeed. So enjoyable! Thank you, Jayne.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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