Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Dance Til I Die Comments

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I will dance til I die
Spread my arms out and fly
When I dance I feel free
Nobody can take that from me
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Atasha Williams
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Jasbir Chatterjee 09 April 2016

lovely poem and the photo too is very good; it complements the poem very well.

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Glen Kappy 10 March 2016

atasha, i was reading poems of yours this morning and came upon this one. it makes me wonder if you're familiar with the sufis- a mystical branch of islam for whom dance is central in their worship. among them are two of my favorite poets- rumi (as rendered by coleman barks) and hafiz (as rendered by daniel ladinsky) . also, i thought you'd probably relate to my poem which begins because of what you have done. love fill and surround you! -glen kappy

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Juan Olivarez 02 March 2016

Wonderful piece. Love the energy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 February 2016

good but edit a bit... my feel hurt u meant feet i think lady

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Atasha Williams 24 February 2016

yesssss lol I meant feet

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 February 2016

I will dance until my sole bleeds I will follow Him anywhere he leads God gave me this gift, use it I will To make people happy, not to rob and kill.. dancing as a lasting theme from now onwards till death and in heaven to dance with the angels.... very nice and i was very happy to read it. thank you. tony

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Atasha Williams 24 February 2016

thank u Tony u always provide loving an encouraging words. God bless u now an always :))))))

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Atasha Williams 24 February 2016

I have a children's dance club I realllly love to dance. :)

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