Dance The Slow Music, The Sandstorm Swirls Comments

I love the flow of this, I love the musical quality, truly a pleasure to read. Ron

Brilliant write Rani...just flows from start to finish...10++++

What awonderful title and poem....oh.the joy of finding a new poet.....John

what can i say? .. this is a work of ARt! 10+++++

Beautifully constructed and very informative - this piece is a pleasure to read.... tank you Rani... and top marks from Fay...

The sandstorm swirls, pebbles and sand Hitting dour walls Dance, dance the slow music Elements appeasing music Music appeasing elements.......................Wonderful lines..............written from the spirit that is feeling divine joy............10+++..........