Dance (Senryu) Comments
with each step you take-
i hear those golden anklets
tintinnabulate
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this is a special composition. your title is brilliant and your command of the language is superb. Well done Govind
A wonderful piece! (And how did you know that I'm wearing golden anklets) : -)
The goddess of poetry wears golden anklets. Since i believe you are touched by the goddess, i knew that you must be wearing it too: -))
I have been waiting for your next poem and it's terrific. I had to look up the word tintinnabulate. It sounds so esoteric. You sen to have mastered the Senryu framework.
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8/11/2025 11:50:51 PM # 1.0.0
A perfect 10 Govind. Super rhythm and economy of words. Loved it, will make my students read this for sure!