Wednesday, July 27, 2022

Dance Partners As Things In The Wind (Blank Verse Sonnet) Comments

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Your spirit holds me near in lift and fall
it takes my breath away with each embrace;
In laughing wind and graceful sky we dance
and I'm a clumsy bear within the fog.
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R. H. Peat
dance fog sonnet
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RH Peat 28 July 2022

I'm glad you like the poem Belle. It was written for my wife. Do you write in meter. If you do point me to your Metric verses or even syllabic.

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Belle Wassermeister 27 July 2022

Excellent sonnet, R. H. Thanks for posting.

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R. H. Peat 30 July 2022

The poem holds its sonnet appearance (short song quality) through the Iambic pentameter.

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