Friday, December 23, 2022

Dance On Comments

Rating: 5.0

fly through the ceiling
play above the rooftop,
saddle a dove with horse feathers
that never drop -
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Smoky Hoss
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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

oh, and the refrain 'dance on' is a perfect reminder to us all... to dance to the music of this wonderful creation

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

oh, I think a trillion stars should dance to the music of this snow fall---also faving this cuz I'm loving reading this over and over

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

I cannot read this too often--each read brings another rhyme and rhythm to set my senses alive---and your infinite depth of thought raises my brain cells from their numb kind of coma---thank you for being a brilliant poet

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M.J. Lemon 26 December 2022

Brilliant verse...the reader fuses with the universe, creation, lasting beauty.

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Jayne Louise Davies 24 December 2022

Wonderful poem! Lovely read x Top marks* Have a wonderful christmas x

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Yes! In spite of all that are negative around us, this is the season of love and hope. So, " dance, on and on, " my dear friends and poets on PoemHunter. A Merry Christmas and happy New Year to all of you.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 December 2022

I totally agree after I read the second time Brilliant

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Belle Wassermeister 23 December 2022

Great poem, Smoky! Five stars!

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