fly through the ceiling
play above the rooftop,
saddle a dove with horse feathers
that never drop -
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oh, I think a trillion stars should dance to the music of this snow fall---also faving this cuz I'm loving reading this over and over
I cannot read this too often--each read brings another rhyme and rhythm to set my senses alive---and your infinite depth of thought raises my brain cells from their numb kind of coma---thank you for being a brilliant poet
Brilliant verse...the reader fuses with the universe, creation, lasting beauty.
Wonderful poem! Lovely read x Top marks* Have a wonderful christmas x
Yes! In spite of all that are negative around us, this is the season of love and hope. So, " dance, on and on, " my dear friends and poets on PoemHunter. A Merry Christmas and happy New Year to all of you.
oh, and the refrain 'dance on' is a perfect reminder to us all... to dance to the music of this wonderful creation