Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Dance Of Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Never seen the God
But ever felt His presence
Never seen thev wind
But ever felt its presence
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Subbaraman N V
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Gita Ashok 28 June 2010

Using the wind as a tool, you have presented such nice philosophical thoughts: Weak is not weak Strong is not strong Flexibility pays Rigidity falls! The poem is replete with imagery. In my mind's eye, I could visualize a mighty storm affecting all trees - both weak and strong. I could also hear the roar of the storm... Beautiful write! Rating: An absolute 10.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 August 2008

a good poem adoring llfe force...wind...tender plants surviving storms where giant trees turning victims...good finding...10

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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