Dance Of Water Comments

Fishes swim in lap of water with open wings, Conchs dance with shell forming shiny rings...true dear madam. A beautiful poem. Top score!

A poen that has the tranquility of water flowing.++10

Thank you for sharing your lovely ode to water! Nice read!

Fabulous expression of an amazilessing to read.....

Water is an important element of the creation without which creation is incomplete.Nicely penned well crafted.

Water is symbol of life. No water no life, I am afraid water after oil, may become a reason of future wars. It's scarcity is a threat to life.......................10

Well written wave of water poem that is very creative1

Well written wave of water poem that is very creative1

Very good poem. The dance and music of water! ~Can be very soothing.

Thank you for share, excellent imagery, loved so much these lines: Inside hidden rocks and in a dried leaf's lap, Water smiles with billion of hopes, does clap.

So glad to see a really good poem which is painting the movement of waters. The lines and verses also dance. Great creative art, Bhargabi!

water is so important for each living thing the rivers flow into the oceans great write

Water is a significant elment vital to mankind, and yet it is for amusement too. Enjoyed the stunning poem, excellently written. You are a very gifted poet. Thanks.

Lovely poem. Truly Nature has give us liquid diamond in the form of water. Our life would be a stand still with out rain dance. Thanks for sharing, also many thanks for reading and commenting on my poem ' Yaden'.

Well penned and loved the imagery.

Love it, water they say is life. Nyc work

It is really a unique poem, i have not read any poem talking about Water in this nice way... Good word, , , , I liked it.

God has created Nature it is liquid diamond, By grace of water plants grow to give almond. Comparison of water to liquid diamond is quite apt and beautiful! It is such a joy to see water dancing with the kiss of wind! Enjoyed! !

I traveled with the water on the lovely journey you created. Water in all forms is beautiful and so is this exquisite poem!

While seasons move it dances in a circle, From up to down and down to up miracle. Further dances inside Earth hiding in soil, It spreads fragrance in vapour burning coil. - I really love the way you have presented the water cycle in rhythm of a dance.