Dance Of War Comments

you paint a very realistic picture with an almost epic feel..rare to meet fine modern poems on war and emotions it bears..thanks for sharing. A.

this poem rocks i love it <3 keep gonig on

Wow, beautifully written

Wow, beautifully written

I love this one..I give it a 10..it was really long for me lol: P..but maybe thats cuz I am not a person how likes to read...

Oh wow I love this one! I havent read all of yours but I'm thinking this is the best by far. I'm reading them in order so we'll see.

great peace, the words too, dance. check out Ivor Hogg's poetry, his style too is flawless

Excellent good strong write here..captures 'the dance ' so wellin colourful images....thanks for sharing this with us...Fi

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Such a nice rhythm to it and perfect comparison to a 'dance' to the death. Wonderful imagery and all over really great piece.