Trees swaying, sashaying in the breeze
Bending, bowing
Onlookers wow-ing
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Trees swaying, sashaying in the breeze Bending, bowing Onlookers wow-ing//////// wow yeah wow- ing// excellent poem shared
Thank you, Mahtab! It is like the audience, the onlookers, are applauding the dance of the trees.
dancing in the wind with the summer breeze putting my mind completely at ease
{{{{{LOUIS! }}}}}! ! ! ! ! Always a delight to hear from you! Yes, I'm back in the saddle again, after an absence where real life's demands took me away from writing poetry for awhile (I moved: a major undertaking.) Still learning my way and orienting myself to my new environs, but a poet can never stop writing for long. Poems seem to find their way to the surface of your mind at the most unexpected times! Love your rhyming comment! :)
Nature in motion! ! Dance of the trees. 🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I smiled at your comment, Sandra. Haven't met a malicious tree yet! (Well, the apple-throwing meanies in the classic film " The Wizard of Oz" had malice, but we must remember that they'd been charmed by a witch!) :)
One can see the trees dancing and wind dancing together in your poem.
Thank you, Carl. Good to hear from you! Actually, the wind is causing the trees to dance, just as music with a catchy beat causes us to dance! :)
A nice poem about swaying of trees in wind. Simple and beautiful. Loved it.
A wonderful and delightful poem...10++++
Thanks so much, Bernard! :)