Saturday, August 24, 2019

Dance Of The Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trees swaying, sashaying in the breeze
Bending, bowing
Onlookers wow-ing
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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2019

A wonderful and delightful poem...10++++

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Practicing Poetess 25 August 2019

Thanks so much, Bernard! :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2019

Trees swaying, sashaying in the breeze Bending, bowing Onlookers wow-ing//////// wow yeah wow- ing// excellent poem shared

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thank you, Mahtab! It is like the audience, the onlookers, are applauding the dance of the trees.

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Louis Rams 24 August 2019

dancing in the wind with the summer breeze putting my mind completely at ease

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

{{{{{LOUIS! }}}}}! ! ! ! ! Always a delight to hear from you! Yes, I'm back in the saddle again, after an absence where real life's demands took me away from writing poetry for awhile (I moved: a major undertaking.) Still learning my way and orienting myself to my new environs, but a poet can never stop writing for long. Poems seem to find their way to the surface of your mind at the most unexpected times! Love your rhyming comment! :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

Nature in motion! ! Dance of the trees. 🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thank you for reading and enjoying, Edward Kofi! :)

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Sandra Feldman 24 August 2019

" Ever growing, " without malice or deceit.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

I smiled at your comment, Sandra. Haven't met a malicious tree yet! (Well, the apple-throwing meanies in the classic film " The Wizard of Oz" had malice, but we must remember that they'd been charmed by a witch!) :)

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Julia Luber 24 August 2019

great premise, rolls out beautifully too

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thanks so much for your generous comment, Julia! :)

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Carl Roussell 24 August 2019

One can see the trees dancing and wind dancing together in your poem.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thank you, Carl. Good to hear from you! Actually, the wind is causing the trees to dance, just as music with a catchy beat causes us to dance! :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 August 2019

A magnificent poem! Beautifully expressed.....10

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Thank you so much, Dr. Swain! :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 August 2019

A nice poem about swaying of trees in wind. Simple and beautiful. Loved it.

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Practicing Poetess 24 August 2019

Glad you liked it, Anil Kumar Panda! :)

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